My thesis statement is mastectomies are more affective than lumpectomies. Main arguments I included in my essay were examples as to why mastectomies are the way to go, pros mastectomies contain, and the lifelong aspects they bring. Counterarguments used were examples of women who endured a lumpectomy, pros lumpectomies brought HOWEVER that they are not a lifelong cure to breast cancer.
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