Mechanics

In the majority of my writings, I constantly tend to include unnecessary words to my sentences. I find it helpful when I reread my writings to see if anything “better” comes to mind. With this problem, it tends to make sentences sound choppy and inconsistent. According to “The Elements of Style Book”, one should active voice to make writing more direct and vigorous. Strength in my writings is keeping related words closely together. If related words aren’t placed together, sentences tend to sound unevenly spaced and can sometimes be confusing to readers.  Placement is the key to proper writing.